Edit: Changed the flame. Keep posting your thoughts. I need know what could look better./Edit.
The proof. I feel very very bad. at this certain moment. Bad, determinated and unappreciated. If that happens the sh!t goes serious. I've done enough. I do not like being disregarded.
Vision: I love how the flame on the tail stands out against the darker background and how it seems to be in movement instead of frozen. The scales have a nice design to them because it fits with the overall picture that is supposed to be taking place here. The feet are reptile like which also goes along with picture's idea very well. The arms could be a bit longer because Charmander is more of a lizard but they give it more of a T-rex feel. The face has great detail on account of it looks as if he is about to attack with fire! Great work on the vision.
Originality: The motion and pose of this picture compliments on what you are aiming for because nobody else has really tried for it. I haven't seen many pictures where the Pokemon is actually aiming to attack someone. He looks ready to go! The style for the fire is nice because it seems to flow about, and its colors mend nicely instead of clashing red, and other bright colors.
Technique: The technique used on this painting is very original due to instead of using just orange to fill in Charmander's body actual scales were put down. The flame is wavy and very free flowing in appearance so it seems effort was put very much in to it.
Impact: This drawing is extremely eye catching when one is looking for it. The details stand out very nicely against the dark backdrop so you can clearly see each one! The simplicity of the background really makes the main thing in this picture stand out which is the Charmander. The backdrop is shaded to compliment the flames and shadows which most do not take the time to do. Overall this drawing is worthy of much praise
This is realy quite amazing! How you made the cute little guy into a fiery T-Rex is incredable! The detail and posing is very well done! The coloring is spot on aswell as the flame on his tail. Overall, the way tou made the animated Charmander into a live-action realistic look was done with perfection! You almost got all five stars out of me my friend! I also liked the light in his mouth! The teeth are also nicely done, and the eyes are nice aswell
Ps, this is my first critique, so go easy on me about it, I know its not very good.....
i just want this pokemon nowwwww in real life lol. you made it look even more BA than i could have ever hoped for . and could your imagin it being made on nintendo for a realistic pokemon with an mmo capability <3 <3
I love how the flame on the tail stands out against the darker background and how it seems to be in movement instead of frozen. The scales have a nice design to them because it fits with the overall picture that is supposed to be taking place here. The feet are reptile like which also goes along with picture's idea very well. The arms could be a bit longer because Charmander is more of a lizard but they give it more of a T-rex feel. The face has great detail on account of it looks as if he is about to attack with fire! Great work on the vision.
Originality:
The motion and pose of this picture compliments on what you are aiming for because nobody else has really tried for it. I haven't seen many pictures where the Pokemon is actually aiming to attack someone. He looks ready to go! The style for the fire is nice because it seems to flow about, and its colors mend nicely instead of clashing red, and other bright colors.
Technique: The technique used on this painting is very original due to instead of using just orange to fill in Charmander's body actual scales were put down. The flame is wavy and very free flowing in appearance so it seems effort was put very much in to it.
Impact:
This drawing is extremely eye catching when one is looking for it. The details stand out very nicely against the dark backdrop so you can clearly see each one! The simplicity of the background really makes the main thing in this picture stand out which is the Charmander. The backdrop is shaded to compliment the flames and shadows which most do not take the time to do. Overall this drawing is worthy of much praise
I also liked the light in his mouth! The teeth are also nicely done, and the eyes are nice aswell
Ps, this is my first critique, so go easy on me about it, I know its not very good.....
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